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Dear Mr Lucas,
Keep doing what you do best and keep in step with the timeless mythology motif in a modern "space-age" setting as only you can. Borrow as much reference material as you can from ancient sources and stories from mankind's wealth of literary material over the centuries. Innovative isn't always better. Think back to such classic war epics as "The Iliad" by Homer, and "The Aeneid" by Virgil. Just as most of the legendary Greek Warriors were defeated at the war besieging Troy, just so should many great Jedi die at the battle of Concord Dawn in the Clone Wars.
Your loyal fans

 

Arguably the best of the Star Wars Saga
 

1. LOOKING FORWARD / LOOKING BACK
Of the three previous installments of the Star Wars Trilogy (Episodes IV-VI), "Episode V: The Empire Strikes Back" seems to be most people's favourite. I would attest that alot of the explanation has to do with the serious-minded tone of which "Empire" tends to deal with its subject matter.

Unlike "A New Hope" and "Return of the Jedi", "Empire" takes itself very seriously at times. It is a dark, somber, dramatic film about a very sinister chapter in the Star Wars saga. It really packs a whollop and stirs real emotional feelings deep witihin the viewer.

No one goes to see Star Wars movies to have a good hearted laugh. Learn from your audience what they prefer most and if you are going to emulate past success, take a cue from The Empire Strikes Back and make this second-installment a great dramatic film.

 


Akira Kurosawa's classic film:
"Seven Samurai"

2. LOOK BACK TO THE MASTERS
Research thoroughly Akira Kurosawa films such as "Seven Samurai" (1954) and "Ran" (1985) to gain insight into spectacularly in-depth characters in a war-like setting.

Perhaps write that a group of seven or so maveric Jedi Knights (including Obi-Wan and Anakin) fight the Mandalorians as a small "dream-team", as an homage to the great Kurosawa film?

Also, take a considerable look at Lewis Milestone's screen adaptation of the Erich Maria Remarque classic war novel "All Quiet on the Western Front" (1930).



George C. Scott as
Ebenezer Scrooge
 

3. CHARLES DICKENS
Anakin's dark story has very similar paralels to Ebenezer Scrooge of Charles Dicken's classic A Christmas Carol.

Both are cruel, yet tragic villians that attain redemption (and not of their own doing) just before the end of their lives. Both Vader and Scrooge have humble and harsh upbringings that cause them each to become powerful, worldly, yet sinister men.

The Prequel Trilogy can thus be written similarly to Scrooge's ghostly visitations, in particular the Ghost of Christmas Past. The Ghost of Christmas Past reveals to Scrooge (and to us as well), how Scrooge tragically evolved from a tender young neglected boy to a malicious, cold, empty, spiritually dead elderly man in old age.


J.R.R. Tolkien's
"The Hobbit"
 

4. J.R.R. TOLKIEN
Essentially Mr. Lucas, you are doing what Tolkien did when he went back in time before the days of the "Lord of the Rings" and wrote "The Silmarillion". Tolkien is the English master of the trilogy and fantasy literature.
Like the Galaxy far far away of so long ago that Luke, Anakin, Obi-Wan and Yoda live, the Universe that Tolkien created in his immagination is very vast and has an enormous history. It's wonderful to get completely absorbed into his world. A reading of his works is also an excellent model upon which to draw inspiration.

In particular, look at the incredibly tragic story of the Gollum character. A cute, small, hobbit-like character named Smeagol that turns into an insane, horribly hideous monster living alone beneath the mountains in a filthy dark swamp because of his obsession with an evil ring that makes it's owner invisible. "But that would only make the evil part of him angrier in the end. He is thin and tough still. But the thing was eating up his mind, of course, and the torment had become almost unbearable. He was alogether wretched. He hated everything, and the ring most of all. He could not get rid of it. He had no will left in the matter." ("The Fellowship of the Ring")
What a wonderful character! Keep Gollum in the back of your mind as you write of Anakin's fall.

Like Tolkien, keep with the ancient Greek notion that the past was larger, more glorious, and wilder than the present. In ancient Greek mythology, each age of man deteriorated in metal quality with each succeeding generation. The first race was gold, the second silver, and so on...until mankind is so degenerate that they will eventually destroy themselves.


5. THE BEST FICTION DRINKS FROM REALITY
It's best to create believable fiction by taking reference from a non-fictional source somewhat. It can be said that fiction is nothing more than a subcontious effort to re-form reality.

With that thought in mind, I suggest using the first World War, (WWI 1914-1918), as a real-life source of inspiration upon which to base the Clone Wars of fiction. Now before you shut me off here, hear me out. Here are the reasons why I think you should losely base the Clone Wars upon the Great War of 1914:

  • The events that we have so far observed in Episodes IV-VI seem to parallel neatly with our own history of World War II. Take note of the Imperial commanders' uniforms, and how Nazi-like they look. Note the term: "Stormtroopers" and their Nazi-like discipline and marching order. Once the old German Empire was dissolved in 1918, new leadership arose such as Adolf Hitler in the role of Supreme Chancelor, a.k.a. Senator Palpatine. Hitler set up concentration camps to exterminate the Jews through genocide/Palpatine "purges" the Jedi. The Imperial commanders have characteristic similarities to Hitler's bulldogs: Rommel, Hesse, Von Barbie, etc...
    Also observe the "good guys" in the film and notice the similarity of the Millenium Falcon's cockpit to a B52-Bomber's. The Rebel fighter's flight uniform looks very much like the American Naval flightsuit of the Pacific.
    If this be the case, if the events we are witnessing in Episodes IV-VI parallel our own World War II's, would it not then be a great idea to base the events before the time of the Empire on the obvious beginnings of the Second World War: that of our own World War I in 1914? I think it's a wonderful setting for inspiration!

  • Almost every major player in the Great War lost their empires, their monarchies, and their colonial holdings after the conflicts ended upon Armistice Day in November 11, 1918. Most of the major world-powers that took part in the fighting were devastated by the war. Consider the Russian Revolutions of 1917. They broke down and fell apart just as the Old Republic of the Star Wars Galaxy would, in order for the Empire to take control so easily.

  • The Great War was the talk of the town. It was so big in fact that for decades to come, men only had to refer to "the war" for anyone to understand what they were talking about. Everyone living in the early decades of the 20th Century talked endlessly about what they went through during the war, just as everyone seems to be doing in the time periods since the legendary Clone Wars in the Star Wars Galaxy. They just can't stop talking about it, it was THAT all-important!

  • The Great War was a major dividing-line between the old world of the 19th Century and our own century; the world would never be the same after the guns stopped smoking. Just as the Clone Wars should be in thier time, a DIVIDING-LINE between past and present; between the Old Republic and the Empire!!!

  • Literally everyone who was anyone and was alive during the time of World-War I took part in the fighting. It involved everyone, world-wide, for the very first time in history. Everyone living at that time felt the effects of the war and most importantly NEVER forgot it! I believe you should write the same kind of cause-and-effect concept as this into the Clone Wars storyline. "None of the star systems were ever again quite the same after the Clone Wars. They were forever scarred!"

  • Due to the enormousness and the brutality of the fighting, many of the 20th war machines and technologies saw their introduction in the Great War:
       1. The Maxim-Machine Gun
       2. The armoured Tank
       3. The Airplane
       4. The Zeppelin observation blimp
       5. Toxic gas, gasmasks, and biological weapons
       6. Barbed Wire
       7. Trench warfare

  • Perhaps many of the innovations of the Empire's technology can trace their beginnings to the Clone Wars as well, such as:
       1. Star Destroyers
       2. Tie Fighters
       3. The Death Stars
       4. Imperial Probe Droids
       5. The body-armour of the Imperial Storm Troopers
       6. AT-AT's and Scout Walkers

    (Afterall, the mighty forces of the Empire that we see in control of the galaxy at the beginning of "Episode IV: A New Hope" could not have evolved overnight). Wouldn't it be ironic to witness the "good guys" (a.k.a. The Republic forces) fighting with early prototype AT-ATs and Star Destroyers?



The Great Carthaginian General: Hannibal

6. AN ANCIENT HISTORIC PARALLEL
I would also suggest having a thorough study of the Punic Wars between ancient Rome and the city of Carthage in the third Century BC.

It can be said that in a very indirect way that completely exterminating Carthage to oblivian after the third Carthaginian War made possible the downfall of the Old Roman Republic and the eventual rise of the Roman Empire under a single Emporer (sound familiar?).

Several wise Roman senators such as Publius Scipio Nasica opposed Cato the Elder, who wished to see Carthage annihilated. Nasica proposed leaving the fear of Carthage in power to be a "check" on Rome's greed and arrogance. Looking back in retrospect, history has proved his wise foresight to be somewhat correct.

What if the Carthaginian general, Hannibal, had survived the Carthaginian Wars and made a living as a ruthless mercenary for hire? Perhaps this is a terrific way of writing the personal history for the Boba Fett character?

 

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